Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
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Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
Bugger!
Sometimes when all is said and done
one thinks “Well hell! Can this be fun?
To sit and ponder; scratch one’s head
as in frustration one is led
to find out after longish time
one simply cannot find a rhyme.
Bugger!
Sometimes when all is said and done
one thinks “Well hell! Can this be fun?
To sit and ponder; scratch one’s head
as in frustration one is led
to find out after longish time
one simply cannot find a rhyme.
Bugger!
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
You, me and I suspect quite a few others Wazza.
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
I sometimes find that is the case
but so that I don't loose face.
I sit and ponder for just a bit
and I always find a word to fit.
Bob
but so that I don't loose face.
I sit and ponder for just a bit
and I always find a word to fit.
Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
Well Sue and Bob, guess I'll just have to get the head down and the bum up ... although that doesn't sound like it's a very comfortable position.
Wazza
Wazza
Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
We've all felt your pain Wazza. Then it's time to change the rhyme!
Heather
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
Just make sure they're proper rhymes Wazza.
There's always free verse of course.
Terry
There's always free verse of course.
Terry
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
You could try writing in Italian, everything ends up, ini, ello, etti , or ina. Piece of cake 

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.
Thanks for the advice people. Actually, despite the quickie post, it's not rhyming I've been having trouble with it's more inspiration (if there really is such an animal.)