Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.

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alongtimegone
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Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.

Post by alongtimegone » Sun May 08, 2016 6:05 pm

Bugger!
Sometimes when all is said and done
one thinks “Well hell! Can this be fun?
To sit and ponder; scratch one’s head
as in frustration one is led
to find out after longish time
one simply cannot find a rhyme.
Bugger!

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Post by mummsie » Sun May 08, 2016 6:13 pm

You, me and I suspect quite a few others Wazza.
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.

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Post by Bob Pacey » Sun May 08, 2016 7:01 pm

I sometimes find that is the case
but so that I don't loose face.
I sit and ponder for just a bit
and I always find a word to fit.

Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.

Post by alongtimegone » Sun May 08, 2016 7:36 pm

Well Sue and Bob, guess I'll just have to get the head down and the bum up ... although that doesn't sound like it's a very comfortable position.
Wazza

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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.

Post by Heather » Sun May 08, 2016 9:44 pm

We've all felt your pain Wazza. Then it's time to change the rhyme!

Heather :)

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Post by Terry » Mon May 09, 2016 12:17 am

Just make sure they're proper rhymes Wazza.

There's always free verse of course.

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Post by Neville Briggs » Mon May 09, 2016 8:18 am

You could try writing in Italian, everything ends up, ini, ello, etti , or ina. Piece of cake ;)
Neville
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Re: Bugger! A quickie about how I'm feeling.

Post by alongtimegone » Mon May 09, 2016 10:04 am

Thanks for the advice people. Actually, despite the quickie post, it's not rhyming I've been having trouble with it's more inspiration (if there really is such an animal.)

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