True Love

[Bob Pacey]

True Love

She gazed into my eye’s and set my heart a flutter
her form was really quite divine and I could only mutter.
I tried to get the words out but my tongue had gone all numb.
the people all around me must have thought I was struck dumb.

I slowly walked towards her and her gentle gaze met mine
those beautiful brown eye’s sent shivers down my spine.
I stood there quite dumb founded at her flowing auburn hair.
I have to make her mine forever this beauty, oh so rare.

It was not what I had come for I was only here to look
but this elegant young lady I just could not overlook.
We’ve been together now for years and still I love her fiery style
But the first time I saw that dappled filly will always bring a smile.

Bob Pacey ( C )

[Maureen K Clifford]

I just knew it was a horse from the first line - recognize that feeling. Lovely Bob

Cheers

Maureen

[keats]

Very much like Ray Essery's first time I milked a cow, so the punchline gets telegraphed a bit mate. But a good poem in itself.

Neil

[Dennis N O'Brien]

Does a dappled filly have to be a horse?

[Bob Pacey]

I wrote it for a girl at work and posted it on her facebook site, she is horse mad.

Her husband was not impressed though


Bob

[Neville Briggs]

You are doing well with control of the metre here Bob.

[Stephen Whiteside]

Well done, Maureen. I thought it was a kitten.

[Dave Smith]

An' I thought it was a bottle of BUNDY!

Sorry Bob but that would have been predictable.

TTFN

[Maureen K Clifford]

Don't do cats Stephen - that wouldn't have crossed my mind even

[Heather]

Bummer, I thought it was dog!

Heather