The Curlew Cries

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The Curlew Cries

Post by manfredvijars » Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:34 pm

This may prolly end up as a lyric ..
(still a bit rough)


The Curlew Cries
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Terry
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Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by Terry » Mon Apr 11, 2016 10:00 am

G/day Manfred

Good one mate.

We have Nightjars over here that shriek real a spooky sort of scream. (you probably have them over your way as well)
I know a good story about a couple of blokes out in a remote area, who swear they were surrounded by some sort of big cats, or spooks of some sort.

Cheers

Terry

Heather

Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by Heather » Mon Apr 11, 2016 10:22 am

That last stanza finishes it off nicely Manfred. :(

Heather :)

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Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Apr 11, 2016 12:17 pm

Beautiful Manny - I hear the music
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Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by manfredvijars » Mon Apr 11, 2016 1:36 pm

Thanks Terry, Heather-Belle & Mausie ..
Been getting into some ethereal stuff lately, but I'll go wherever my Muse takes me ..

Thanks again for your kind comments ... :)

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Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by Terry » Mon Apr 11, 2016 2:58 pm

Yes that's what it's all about Manny

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Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by Catherine Lee » Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:01 pm

Lovely lyrics Manny and so atmospheric - like Maureen, I definitely hear the music!

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Re: The Curlew Cries

Post by manfredvijars » Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:08 pm

Thank you Catherine and yes Terry, go where She prompts ...

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