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Hart Creek Debutante Ball

Post by manfredvijars » Thu Feb 18, 2016 8:46 am

I came across this little pearl from Graham Connors, thought I'd post it for comments ... :o

Hart Creek Debutante Ball
(c)Graeme Connors

He was dead before he hit the floor
There was nothing we could do
Everyone just stood there stunned
Hoping he'd come to
Knowing in our heart of hearts
He had no chance at all
Against a .303 and blind jealousy
At the Hart Creek Debutante Ball

He was just a wild young country boy
Who drank and played around
A well-known threat to the self-respect
Of several men in town
But the one who shot him down was not
A local man at all
But a young girl who nobody knew
At the Hart Creek Debutante Ball

With the smoking gun still on her arm
I heard her say "farewell"
And "C'est la vie, my love" as she
Ejected the spent shell
Then she tossed a diamond ring across
That old Masonic Hall
She was all alone and eight months gone
At the Hart Creek Debutante Ball

So Mothers tell your wayward sons
Not to drink and womanise
Or some dark night they'll pay the price
Straight between the eyes
Cause a fiancée in the family way
Can be no fun at all
With .303 and blind jealousy
At the Hart Creek Debutante Ball
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Re: Hart Creek Debutante Ball

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Feb 26, 2016 8:20 am

Sex, drugs and rock and roll aren't a good mix :o :lol: Rather an unusual theme - but daresay similar things may well have happened - I've pinched it for the FB page
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Re: Hart Creek Debutante Ball

Post by manfredvijars » Fri Feb 26, 2016 11:50 am

Goodonya Mausie :)
I love the lyrics because they're so 'Australian'. Instead of, 'six guns' at 'proms' in the 'high school hall', we have 303s at a deb ball in the Masonic hall and a universal theme, sufficiently over the top to make it unmistakenly Aussie AND a great "piss-take" ...

Well done Graham Connors - Great writing ... :D

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Re: Hart Creek Debutante Ball

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Feb 26, 2016 8:50 pm

so Australian I kept wanting to read B and S ball as I thought it a better venue. :lol:
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Re: Hart Creek Debutante Ball

Post by Catherine Lee » Sat Feb 27, 2016 5:58 pm

I enjoy stories like this Mannie - thanks for posting. When I came to the 'Mothers tell your wayward sons' bit it reminded me of a verse in The House of New Orleans and I discovered the whole thing could actually fit to that same tune! :P

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