Diamantina Coming Down

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manfredvijars

Diamantina Coming Down

Post by manfredvijars » Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:59 am

Diamantina Coming Down
(c) 2016 Manfred Vijars
Last edited by manfredvijars on Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Feb 15, 2016 10:16 am

I'm hearing the music - :lol: Surely you have set it up? Just lovely and that rain will be music to any graziers ears out there for sure. Not sure it will be drought breaking though unless they get some good follow up, but certainly cause for celebration.
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by Cropduster » Tue Feb 16, 2016 9:05 pm

I agree

There is music to the lyric, Very nice, Manny
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manfredvijars

Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by manfredvijars » Wed Feb 17, 2016 8:13 am

Thanks Allan, Mausie.
It's a bit rough but it works. ... :D
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Feb 17, 2016 11:54 am

Different to Manfred. he's a bit rough but he doesn't work :lol:
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by manfredvijars » Wed Feb 17, 2016 2:11 pm

Neville, you're an idiot - but I luv ya ... :D
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by Heather » Wed Feb 17, 2016 3:29 pm

Someone's been out bush! Good one Manfred.

Heather :)
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by Catherine Lee » Thu Feb 18, 2016 2:22 pm

Have to agree with everything said here - there is definitely instant music in your ears when you read these words Mannie.
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Re: Diamantina Coming Down

Post by manfredvijars » Sun Feb 21, 2016 9:32 pm

Thanks Heather, Catherine. All done and dusted, off to the next one ... :D
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