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[Heather]

[Neville Briggs]

I was imagining that little drama in the childrens' book with some lively illustrations., I think it would go well.

[Heather]

Thanks Neville - feel free .

Nice Marty suggested the same thing. He's might use the poem for his kids' poetry classes. This started out as my first ever attempt at internal rhyme - which is why the words were simple. I went back to it some time later when I was stuck for something to write and realised it could make a kids' poem. Goes to show, never throw anything out! It's kinda like the old woman that swollowed the fly in a way..

[Heather]

Aahhmmmm, somebody is a bit confused about who they are today!

[mummsie]

Great one Heather, made me think of ''There was an old lady who swallowed a spider'', would make a great kids tale, better talk to Trish about publishing

Sue

[Heather]

Righto Sue, you're in charge of publicity, Neville can do illustrations and Trisha's in charge of publishing. Easy really!

A good leader knows how to delegate!

[mummsie]

Does that include photography, I've got some good ones!!!

Sue

[Heather]

Sue between you and Bob I am cornered, blackmailed, reduced to tears, can't leave my house, must keep my clothes on at all times, watch for spy satellites. What's the world coming to?

[Heather]

I think somebody is feeling a bit left out today!

[mummsie]

I'm worried about you Marty, CLEO magazines