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warooa
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by warooa » Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:27 pm
Didn't have time to put this down meself so got one of me lackys onto it.
Cheers, Marty
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william williams
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by william williams » Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:38 pm
not bad Warooa, let's see if you can record it others do, she ain't hard mate
Bill the old battler
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Bob Pacey
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by Bob Pacey » Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:29 pm
Reckon you could do it better though Marty.
They always treat them as a monologue.
Bob
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keats
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by keats » Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:33 pm
You bloody woose Marty! Lol great work though, can I buy your lacky's CD anywhere? Lol
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by Neville Briggs » Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:15 pm
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that's fantastic Marty. I agree with Martboy, you could do better. The ABC commentator voice hasn't quite got the full flavour of the tropical troppo.
The strength of this poem is all the vivid, concrete images, the speaker doing things, action !which makes the language come alive. ... Great !!
Neville
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warooa
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by warooa » Fri Jun 10, 2011 6:10 am
Yeah old Kezza needs a bit of work on his inflection, but can't diss him, he gave it a good crack. I guess I'll have to 'walk the walk' meself now and dig something appropriate up.
Cheers, Marty
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by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:43 am
So when do you get time to write poetry? This is full of ar-tistic flair and I see the missus gets a cuddle, you get a beer, the kids get a bath and the dog- what does he get??? checked for ticks - oh well he got a look in
Great yarn but agree with the others - would have been good to hear you do it yourself - what did your other slaves die from??
Cheers
Maureen
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by Dave Smith » Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:43 pm
Hey Cobber I spent a couple of arvo’s with you an your mob, didn’t see any artistic flair going on, must have been looking at the bottom of me glass.
Oh yair good yarn though.
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Heather
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by Heather » Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:01 pm
Loved it the first time I read it; still love it. Kerry warmed up towards the end I thought. Still rather hear Marty recite it.
Heather
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