One of my early writing attempts. This was done on a hand held digital notetaker, and I muffled the mike. I still have a fair way to go to improve my speaking presentation.
THE BUSH POET
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Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Nothing too much wrong with that one Nev ... Just relax, tell the story (read it according to the punctuation) and most importantly - Enjoy yourself while you're doing it (you're almost there) ...
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the grey and gritty streets just tell a different yarn Neville - I personally thought this was fine, you speak very clearly didn't find anything at all wrong with the presentation....well done.
Cheers
Maureen
Cheers
Maureen
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Thanks Manfred, thanks Maureen I appreciate your comments.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.