A CONSEQUENCE OF TIME

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Thu Jul 02, 2015 3:41 pm

Good work TrishA,

There's some big words in there.

Post by **Shelley Hansen** » Thu Jul 02, 2015 9:04 pm

Wow, Trisha, that is exquisite! I immediately got the mental picture of an old ruined homestead in our district. Your word picture is alive! I could almost reach out and touch it!

Cheers, Shelley

Catherine Lee · Post by **Catherine Lee** » Thu Jul 02, 2015 9:54 pm

I love this poem Trisha! If I had to select each line and/or word in here that really stands out to me I think I'd just be copying and pasting the whole poem, so I won't! But that should tell you how clearly this beautiful poem paints the picture for me and how I admire your excellent choice of words. Love how you finish it in the last stanza as well - that's the nail on the head. Hats off to you on this one!

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Thu Jul 02, 2015 10:25 pm

You have made good use of the prompts with this delightful piece Trisha that first line just draws the reader in - or it did me.

I liked 'fractured visions' and 'crystalline reflections' - nicely used. Your words painted a very clear picture for me, reminded me of a shot taken by another mate of mine that I will share.

goulburn homestead by Rossco.jpg

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Thu Jul 02, 2015 10:34 pm

Thanks Neville, maybe 'your' muse paid me a visit this week.

That's huge praise Shelley and Catherine! Many thanks and much appreciated. I did enjoy writing this one.

That shot does seem to capture the scene Maureen. There's something about old houses and their secrets.
Trish

Terry · Post by **Terry** » Tue Jul 07, 2015 2:21 pm

I agree with Catherine regarding your excellent choice of words throughout the poem.
You take the reader with you and we can see what you describe.

A pleasure to read Wendy.

Regards Terry

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Tue Jul 07, 2015 3:40 pm

Stone the flaming crows Trish are some of those words actually in the dictionary ?

I'm gonna have to write them down look them up and then read it again

as my grandson would say " Just Gammin "

a job worth doing is worth doing well.

Cheers Bob

Terry · Post by **Terry** » Tue Jul 07, 2015 8:06 pm

Sorry Trish got my names mixed up there - But the rest was spot on.

Terry

Post by **warooa** » Wed Jul 08, 2015 8:29 am

In agreeance

a wonderful tapestry of words that all roll into each other exquisitely.

One to be proud of, Trish.

Cheers, Marty

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Wed Jul 08, 2015 1:20 pm

Thanks Terry, Bob & Marty. I'm humbled by your comments.
I hope the dictionary helped Bob.

Trish

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

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