I did get it into the magazine, Marty. If you check page 11 of last year's October-November edition, you'll find a long article I wrote that was specifically addressed to competition organisers about changing their rules...particularly relating to previous publication. And there was a poem of mine on the same page. Anything else you want?
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						homework mid june 2013 - Looking down
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Re: homework mid june 2013 - Looking down
Your first line made me giggle Marty (sorry)   I thought only God did that
   I thought only God did that  Technically speaking of course that is not true.  I often look down from my pedestal only problem is it gets a bit wobbly at times.
 Technically speaking of course that is not true.  I often look down from my pedestal only problem is it gets a bit wobbly at times.
Incontinence pads are helpful when suffering from LBL...OK Yes I knew you were saying that tongue in cheek - for some of us though it is a serious problem.
My only nit pick and I am sure Neville will correct me if I am wrong is that by definition is a sage not a wise man. That being the case the use of the word wise would be superfluous. Other than that though it rolls along nicely. Well done.
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Maureen
			
									
									 I thought only God did that
   I thought only God did that  Technically speaking of course that is not true.  I often look down from my pedestal only problem is it gets a bit wobbly at times.
 Technically speaking of course that is not true.  I often look down from my pedestal only problem is it gets a bit wobbly at times.Incontinence pads are helpful when suffering from LBL...OK Yes I knew you were saying that tongue in cheek - for some of us though it is a serious problem.
My only nit pick and I am sure Neville will correct me if I am wrong is that by definition is a sage not a wise man. That being the case the use of the word wise would be superfluous. Other than that though it rolls along nicely. Well done.
Cheers
Maureen
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Re: homework mid june 2013 - Looking down
I heard you the first time Marty   
   
   The only time I use sage is with onion when stuffing chickens, but whatever rows your boat sunshine
  The only time I use sage is with onion when stuffing chickens, but whatever rows your boat sunshine 
			
									
									 
   
   The only time I use sage is with onion when stuffing chickens, but whatever rows your boat sunshine
  The only time I use sage is with onion when stuffing chickens, but whatever rows your boat sunshine 
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site  here -
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
						http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.

