My Love
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My Love
Thought I'd try something romantic.....
MY LOVE.
MY LOVE.
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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: My Love
Oh Neville - how could any real woman not be charmed? Most blokes would just call thighs fat but adipose...such eloquence and grace and do I detect a sense of yearning for the more curvaceous girls hidden in those lovely words?....be still my heart, be still...he may yet come. (sigh)
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I do have a little twinge of remorse over that one Bill...Robbie Burns' ghost might come after me.
I hate to think what the ladies might say about me Maureen I got some feedback from one, I did this verse at the Hunter Bush Poets comp last October and the compere, Carol Heuchen, gave me a bit of a serve ( I had to expect that )
I hate to think what the ladies might say about me Maureen I got some feedback from one, I did this verse at the Hunter Bush Poets comp last October and the compere, Carol Heuchen, gave me a bit of a serve ( I had to expect that )
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Re: My Love
Simple irresistible Neville!
All this swooning is starting to make my head ache. Got to find someone to catch me!
All this swooning is starting to make my head ache. Got to find someone to catch me!
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Re: My Love
Thats why some mystique is still required Nev.
Most of us look a lot better dressed then undressed.
Women no sense of humour really.
except Maureen of course Whew.
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Most of us look a lot better dressed then undressed.
Women no sense of humour really.
except Maureen of course Whew.
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Thanks for the reply Heather
Bob, I fell over into the mud on a riverbank once..I can assure you my wife has a sense of humour
Bob, I fell over into the mud on a riverbank once..I can assure you my wife has a sense of humour
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Re: My Love
She would need one Nev to put up with you, you romantic you,
Just played this for Hubb, he loves it, leave it on there he said, he wants to learn it.
Sue
Just played this for Hubb, he loves it, leave it on there he said, he wants to learn it.
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the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.