LONELY ... a  rondelet .. Maureen Clifford © 
Through open doors
he saw the wet and windy day.
Through open doors.
He heard laughter upon the moors -
 smiling puddles begged kids to play.
The empty evening stretched away,
through open doors.
			
									
									LONELY ... a rondelet
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LONELY ... a rondelet
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				Neville Briggs
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Re: LONELY ... a rondelet
But that's a rhyming poem in the non rhyming section   ??
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Re: LONELY ... a rondelet
So it is, Neville.  Perhaps Maureen has chosen this spot because it is not exactly a bush poem.  
But I think it probably belongs in ABPA members poetry - do you agree, Maureen?
Cheers
Shelley
			
									
									But I think it probably belongs in ABPA members poetry - do you agree, Maureen?
Cheers
Shelley
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Re: LONELY ... a rondelet
I think I was having a blonde moment or a bit of brain fade Shelley and Neville - the poetry prompts were in the wrong spot as well   Feel free to move it Shelley if you would
   Feel free to move it Shelley if you would
			
									
									 Feel free to move it Shelley if you would
   Feel free to move it Shelley if you wouldCheck out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site  here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
						http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
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Re: LONELY ... a rondelet
I will move it Maureen - but as since discussed, the "mis-location" of the poetry prompts was not your error, but mine when I was moderating and locking the topic.  Oops - and apologies.
			
									
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Re: LONELY ... a rondelet
O dear Maureen,Shelley, I was just teasing, sorry about the trouble.  Nice little rondolet.   
			
									
									
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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