From the City to the Bush…and Back to the City!

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From the City to the Bush…and Back to the City!

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Wed Oct 19, 2016 6:47 pm

From the City to the Bush…and Back to the City!

It was not what I’d expected.
If I ever had elected
A location better suited to the bush birds’ morning song
I’d have thought this spot a beauty.
Now, alas, it is my duty
To inform you very sadly I was badly, madly wrong.

For I heard one singer only,
And his song seemed sad and lonely
As it echoed round the courtyard, and it rather got me down,
And my mood of calm contentment
Turned to surly, deep resentment,
And I cursed the arid vacuum of this wretched, tin-pot town,

And it seemed the greatest pity
That I’d ever left the city
Where a multi-layered chorus greets me daily, dusk and dawn,
For I pondered the thin singing
In my ears so faintly ringing,
And my early adulation was replaced by nought but scorn.

So I learned a lesson, surely,
Though belatedly and poorly
That the world is often tricky, and it’s seldom smooth and straight,
And the birds that gather daily
By my window, singing gaily,
I appreciate more fully, for they truly are first rate!

© Stephen Whiteside 08.09.2016
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Re: From the City to the Bush…and Back to the City!

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Oct 19, 2016 9:31 pm

Wow, Stephen - that's a pearler! I love it!!

You've maintained that momentum so skillfullly! Is it based on a real experience?

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Oct 19, 2016 11:30 pm

Good one Stephen
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Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Oct 20, 2016 6:39 am

Thanks Maureen, Shelley.

Yes, Shelley, loosely.
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Post by thestoryteller » Fri Oct 21, 2016 12:56 pm

We have a constant early morning serenade as we have a native tree garden along our kitchen back patio and trees out the front as well. Though I must admit that the rain bird could incorporate a few more notes to his melody.

Thanks for sharing Stephen.


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Post by Stephen Whiteside » Fri Oct 21, 2016 1:00 pm

Thanks, Merv. Sound pretty good!
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Re: From the City to the Bush…and Back to the City!

Post by Catherine Lee » Sun Oct 23, 2016 5:52 pm

Just read this three times over Stephen, and I think it's delightful!

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Post by Stephen Whiteside » Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:45 am

Thank you, Catherine!
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