INDEPENDENCE LOST

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Cropduster
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INDEPENDENCE LOST

Post by Cropduster » Tue Mar 01, 2016 7:31 am

INDEPENDENCE LOST

Foraging through chests of drawers
and boxed up bags of bric-a-brac,
sweet memories of mine and yours
came trickling, then flooding back.

Embraced by warm remembrances,
awash in thoughts of yester year,
I sighed a sigh of time gone by
which heralded a lonely tear.

Age tends to cage us, trapped within
these brittle bones and failing limbs,
to gaze upon a youthful time
of playful romps and summer swims.

Where went the care free nonchalance,
the chasing of the surf and sun,
buoyed by a sheer exuberance
of independence fin'lly won.

It disappeared into a chest,
along with independence lost.
The price paid for a length of life
Is learning to accept the cost.

Copyright (c) Allan Cropper March 2016

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Shelley Hansen
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Re: INDEPENDENCE LOST

Post by Shelley Hansen » Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:08 pm

Very poignant, Allan. It really resonates with me at the moment, watching the sad slow decline of my Mum, aged 91.

Cheers, Shelley
Shelley Hansen
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fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
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Re: INDEPENDENCE LOST

Post by r.magnay » Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:14 pm

I like your work Allan.
Ross

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