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Re: Daily advice

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jun 10, 2015 8:07 am

You'll have to get it from Wendy Bishop, you can find her teaching as a Professor in literature at Florida State University. :)


I'll have a go, this is my crummy version as an example of empty words;

After the raging battle
Dead sailors lay in the water.
Their bodies wash up on the beach,
sad remnants of a great slaughter.


this is Kenneth Slessor's masterpiece;

Softly and humbly to the Gulf of Arabs
The convoys of dead sailors come;
At night they sway and wander in the waters far under,
But morning rolls them in the foam.
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Re: Daily advice

Post by David Campbell » Wed Jun 10, 2015 10:05 am

Excellent example, Neville. To quote the legendary Shane Crawford: "That's what I'm talkin' about!"

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Re: Daily advice

Post by manfredvijars » Wed Jun 10, 2015 11:03 am

Great example Nevvie ... :D

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Re: Daily advice

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jun 11, 2015 11:00 am

G'day Manfred, David. It's all too easy for me to concoct a bad example ;) I have to rely on someone else for a good example :)
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Re: Daily advice

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jun 11, 2015 3:11 pm

Get a good job that pays good money.


Hon. J. Hockey
Federal Treasurer.
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Re: Daily advice

Post by Heather » Thu Jun 11, 2015 3:35 pm

...and then you'll only have to work until you are 70.

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Re: Daily advice

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jun 11, 2015 7:57 pm

Oh dear ! Heather, you have got such a looong way to go. :lol:
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Re: Daily advice

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:00 pm

Put your trousers on first...then your shoes.


Gary Larson
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Re: Daily advice

Post by Heather » Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:17 pm

Durr!

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Re: Daily advice

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Jun 12, 2015 9:15 pm

It's good advice Heather :roll:
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