THE BULL-RIDER

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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jul 22, 2015 7:40 pm

Whooo Hooo - Ride 'em cowboy - Love it Trisha. Great use of the prompts :lol:
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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Heather » Wed Jul 22, 2015 9:36 pm

Good one Trish. You're back on the horse :)
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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Jul 22, 2015 9:59 pm

You certainly set the scene well, Trish! Bob will be delighted :D
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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Jul 22, 2015 11:23 pm

Wow, great poem Trish! This is another that really paints such a clear picture. At this rate I won't ever need to go to a real rodeo, as you and the others have already taken me there!
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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:10 am

Yes Yes yes Trish well written and a good use of the prompts.


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Trisha Patterson

Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Trisha Patterson » Thu Jul 23, 2015 10:55 am

Thanks everyone for the comments.
Hopefully I can stay on that "horse" for a while Heather..it does tend to throw me quite often. :lol:
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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by David Campbell » Thu Jul 23, 2015 5:14 pm

Nicely done, Trish. If you get thrown, just pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and get right back on again!

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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Heather » Thu Jul 23, 2015 5:46 pm

Ya got to give the horse a rest now and again Trish. :)
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Re: THE BULL-RIDER

Post by Trisha Patterson » Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:39 pm

I hear what you are saying David and agree, but often it is easier said than done!
I think my horse has been resting way too long Heather...it's time he had a good workout. He's only been trotting lately, and I still fall off...he needs to learn to gallop and I need to learn to hang on! :lol:
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