Technology Meets The Bush

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Technology Meets The Bush

Post by warooa » Fri Jan 02, 2015 7:28 am

Do I get a special gold star for being the first to do their homework for the year :)

Technology Meets The Bush
M. Pattie 2015

My daughters: they’re real bush kids, in this whiz-bang hi-tech age,
and the value of their upbringing is sometimes hard to gauge.
They climb up trees, make cubby huts and swim down at the creek,
with horses, dogs and acres for the bestest hide and seek.
While other kids are goggle-eyed and transfixed to a screen,
they’re outside chasing butterflies and hunting tourmaline.

I don’t think that they’re missing out on life one little bit,
the only eye-pad we’ve got’s in the glove box first aid kit.
Their IPod’s made of bush bark and the ear phone cord is string,
our smart phone’s still a land line with a real old fashioned ring.
The pros and cons; the great debate, but I’m not taking sides,
but sure enough the high tech world and simple life collides.

The kids came home from school, they’d been rewarded, which was nice;
for one day only they could take an electronic device.
IPods, game boys, screens, Nintendos – whatever you choose,
for one day only, at the school and teachers will excuse.
But my kids didn’t squeal and jump for joy like they were s’posed ta
Cos one kid got the angle grinder, the other took the toaster.

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Jan 02, 2015 7:40 am

Cracker Marty a beauty. I've got two grandsons one would spent all day upstairs on the games console the other will be down the yard inventing something.

Get them out there and let them suck up some germs .

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jan 02, 2015 8:10 am

10 qold stars for that one Marty first poem for the year's a reminder of how it should be and for raising kids who still have active imaginations and know how to use them. They will long remember their free and blissful childhood long after the electronic devices have died. Great poem too. Happy New Year to you top enders
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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Heather » Fri Jan 02, 2015 9:10 am

Lovely poem Marty and it reminds me of my own childhood. I'm a great believer in children having a childhood. We moved to this property because I wanted my kids to have a country upbringing. There was lots of tree climbing, animal raising and - I later found out, (to my horror), crawling down wombat holes!

Unfortunately the modern world will collide and they will have to learn to use phones and computers etc to work in the adult world. My own childhood was so full of adventure, freedom and natural wonders that I never wanted to grow up; I guess I have, but there's still a lot of the child in me.

Heather :)

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:29 pm

Bobby dazzler ... ripper ... little beauty ... and a good poem also.
Loved it Marty and how true. Lucky kids.
Wazza

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Heather » Fri Jan 02, 2015 12:54 pm

Bobby dazzler ... ripper ... little beauty ... and a good poem also.
I think that translates to a gold star Marty! :D

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by warooa » Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:17 pm

Heather wrote:Lovely poem Marty and it reminds me of my own childhood.
Your Dad gave you an angle grinder to take to school as well :? ?

Thanks Heather, Bob, Waz and Maureen . . . yeah screen time can be overdone by kids and adults alike - mine are in the pool (kids, not screens) so I'm gunna slip out into the garden with a chilled Coopers Green and my Kate Grenville book and listen to the storms roll in from the west. ;)

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Catherine Lee » Fri Jan 02, 2015 3:20 pm

Love it Marty - great poem and so, so true!
Love this line: 'the only eye-pad we’ve got’s in the glove box first aid kit'. :lol:

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Heather » Fri Jan 02, 2015 4:33 pm

I don't recall ever taking an angle grinder Marty. I went to school armed with fossils, lizards, gem stones and stick insects for show and tell. It was also a household without television for most of the time and i would make cubbies in the long grass (can't have owned a lawn mower! :roll: ), read a book a day and play under the sprinklers on a hot day. I also recall jumping off the shed for fun (didn't have a tree big enough to climb). I have no idea how I escaped without breaking a bone. It was not a conventional childhood for the time and the only thing i missed out on were the conversations with my schoolmates about what happened on the tv soaps the night before and exposure to contemporary music.

Your kids will grow up with happy memories of their childhood.

Heather :)

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Re: Technology Meets The Bush

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Jan 02, 2015 6:53 pm

Bloody city slicker when I was a boy we were so poor that if I had not been born a boy I would have had no toys at all !


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