Shackles of Consent

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manfredvijars

Shackles of Consent

Post by manfredvijars » Sat Oct 12, 2013 8:34 am

Shackles of Consent
(c) 2007 M. Vijars
Last edited by manfredvijars on Thu Jun 09, 2016 12:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mal McLean
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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by Mal McLean » Sat Oct 12, 2013 9:28 am

I hope she hears you Manfred :cry:
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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Oct 12, 2013 9:29 am

A tricky subject beautifully and sensitively handled with your clever words Mannie

Typo in this line no apostrophe needed in its - each piercing slash will find it's mark.

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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by r.magnay » Sat Oct 12, 2013 11:00 am

You expressed, in the newsletter, some concerns about our craft being lost Manfred...not while there is blood in your pen mate.
Ross
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manfredvijars

Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by manfredvijars » Sat Oct 12, 2013 3:28 pm

Thank you Mal, Mausie - and Ross what a wonderful compliment.

Thank you ...
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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by Terry » Sat Oct 12, 2013 6:32 pm

Yep that's a ripper Manfred.

Terry
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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by warooa » Sun Oct 13, 2013 4:38 am

Bonza :)
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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by william williams » Sun Oct 13, 2013 9:00 am

good on you mate

bill the old battler
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Re: Shackles of Consent

Post by manfredvijars » Sun Oct 13, 2013 11:13 pm

Thank you, Terry, Marty and Bill ... :)
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