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David J Delaney

My winning poem

Post by David J Delaney » Thu Apr 11, 2013 9:30 pm

I'm sure I have posted this somewhere before but, here is the winning version of the Rabindrananth Tagore Award...... :D

His last muster

He’s resting now inside his battered swag
as cattle doze not far from where he lies.
While other stockmen camp nearby and brag,
this man, prefers the quiet starlit skies.

The four week mustering is all but done,
when very soon he’ll take a well earned break;
far from the horses and the cattle’s run,
then rest his bones, that these days always ache.

His best friend ‘Jess’ is hobbled for the night,
he knows she will not wander far away
then, wake him in the early morning light
with gentle nudging and persistent neigh.

So as he drifts into a restless sleep,
again the visions of his wife appear.
He calls her name; she turns and starts to weep,
while reaching for him, say’s she need’s him near.

His happy thoughts become a nightmare scene,
the fire and the horror and distress.
Still hears the screaming from his darling Jean;
Her life was lost amongst that burning mess.

That past event he still can’t comprehend
while, even years of droving mobs along
just could not help his broken heart to mend,
because for twenty years, her ghost has shone.

The neighs from Jess now wake the other men,
for as the dawn is breaking, he still lies.
He’s in the arms of his love Jean again,
together, as they walk beneath clear skies.

David J Delaney ©

Terry
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Re: My winning poem

Post by Terry » Thu Apr 11, 2013 10:04 pm

Hi David,

Congratulations and well done mate.

Terry

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Re: My winning poem

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Apr 12, 2013 9:46 am

Beautiful Dave - I don't recall seeing it before but it would have been a worthy winner without a doubt. Good on you

Cheers

Maureen
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Re: My winning poem

Post by william williams » Fri Apr 12, 2013 9:59 am

No wonder you won mate, with a poem like that

Congrat's once again mate. Bill the old battler

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Re: My winning poem

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:42 am

Very poignant David. Great concluding paragraph.
Wazza

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Re: My winning poem

Post by Brenda Joy » Sat Apr 13, 2013 12:18 pm

David,
CONGRATULATIONS! Can you private email me with details of the comp to see if we can get the poem included in the Poetry section (where first prize winners will one day reside)? <halenda@live.com.au>
Brenda

On that topic - if anyone wins a comp please let me know. My sleuthing procedure is not always the easiest or quickest way of finding out.
Sing HU to open your heart.

David J Delaney

Re: My winning poem

Post by David J Delaney » Sat Apr 13, 2013 3:40 pm

Thank you everyone.... :D ...Brenda, will do... :D

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