Homework for w/e 24/09/12 - GET THE MESSAGE

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Homework for w/e 24/09/12 - GET THE MESSAGE

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Sep 10, 2012 1:45 pm

GET THE MESSAGE


My mate Marty is mithering about acrostic rhymes
And yet I see he dove right in and wrote one in quick time.
Rhythm and rhyme it surely has – he’s such a clever chook
Though in it a small dummy spit. Is our Marty a sook?
You’d think he was if you believed the random choice he took.

Google. You’ll find acrostic poems date back a long time
Even in the bible they’re written – prayers to saints, in rhyme
To recall all the heavens planets there’s a little chime.**

Oh yes this form is nothing new so please don’t dummy spit
Very likely I would think that you might live to rue it.
Egads methinks one does protest too much I have to say
Round medieval courts acrostics were a way to play.

In ‘ Alice through the Looking Glass’
The name revealed in full at last.

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In Lewis Carroll's Through the Looking-Glass, the final chapter "A Boat, Beneath A Sunny Sky is an acrostic of the real Alice's name: Alice Pleasance Liddell.

Acrostics occur in the first four of the five songs that make up the Book of Lamentations,
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Re: Homework for w/e 24/09/12 - GET THE MESSAGE

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:42 pm

Well I'm a well rounded type of girl Marty - like to cover as many bases as I can :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Sep 12, 2012 5:58 pm

Good on you Maureen.

Just to help Marty along, the acrostic in the so-called Book of Lamentations is successive letters of the Hebrew alphabet, which unfortunately is not recognisable in English translation. ;)

Everyone who has tried to learn music would know Every Good Boy Deserves Fruit( letters of the music stave) or Go Down And Enter By Force ( the major sharp keys in music )
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Re: Homework for w/e 24/09/12 - GET THE MESSAGE

Post by Terry » Wed Sep 12, 2012 10:25 pm

Two of them! Your a glutten for punishment Maureen.

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Sep 13, 2012 9:35 am

Oh I am right up on Hebrew Neville hence the Lamentations. :lol: :lol:

Just setting a good example Terry - never ask the troops to do something you won't do yourself :roll:
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