Don't you just love itThe "bump" in the rhythm was entirely intentional as in the tradition of carpet making, the "weaver" traditionally put in an intentional flaw, as a signal that the product was man-made, as opposed to the perfection of "God-made."
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This was the response on another site to my post that the poem was beaut but there was a bit of a bump in the rhythm. I reckon it is a pearler I reckon you will appreciate this one Neville.
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Aaaah whooo ha ha! Hey Maurenn didya reply....'''Ooops. Sorry God.. I didn't realise just Who I was critiquing.'' Ooh haa he haw!!
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No I wouldn't have been game I went straight to the naughty corner - chagrined and deflated.
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That says it Maureen. I always like to remind myself that the word ART is the first three letters of the word ARTIFICIAL.
Neville
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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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G'day Maureen,
Yes, some of us are mere mortals and then there are those who think they are above us. Was it a rhyming poem?
Yes, some of us are mere mortals and then there are those who think they are above us. Was it a rhyming poem?
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