Njungari
- Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Njungari
Love it Bill - nice choice of music as well
Cheers
Maureen
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Re: Njungari
I thought that you did well with this one Bill. I think your speech is clear and your enunciation is very good. I thought that your timing was excellent for that theme.
I know next to nothing about aboriginal lore so I can't comment on that.
Come to think of it, I know next to nothing about performing on audio clips, but I thought I would mention my impressions.
I know next to nothing about aboriginal lore so I can't comment on that.
Come to think of it, I know next to nothing about performing on audio clips, but I thought I would mention my impressions.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: Njungari
Thank you very much Maureen and Neville Much apreciated
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Re: Njungari
Well-presented Bill. The timing the tone of voice and the story all fitted well. I liked it.
Dave.
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