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The Curlew Cries

Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:34 pm
by manfredvijars
This may prolly end up as a lyric ..
(still a bit rough)


The Curlew Cries
(c) 2016 Manfred Vijars

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 10:00 am
by Terry
G/day Manfred

Good one mate.

We have Nightjars over here that shriek real a spooky sort of scream. (you probably have them over your way as well)
I know a good story about a couple of blokes out in a remote area, who swear they were surrounded by some sort of big cats, or spooks of some sort.

Cheers

Terry

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 10:22 am
by Heather
That last stanza finishes it off nicely Manfred. :(

Heather :)

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 12:17 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Beautiful Manny - I hear the music

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 1:36 pm
by manfredvijars
Thanks Terry, Heather-Belle & Mausie ..
Been getting into some ethereal stuff lately, but I'll go wherever my Muse takes me ..

Thanks again for your kind comments ... :)

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 2:58 pm
by Terry
Yes that's what it's all about Manny

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 6:01 pm
by Catherine Lee
Lovely lyrics Manny and so atmospheric - like Maureen, I definitely hear the music!

Re: The Curlew Cries

Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:08 pm
by manfredvijars
Thank you Catherine and yes Terry, go where She prompts ...