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Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 7:38 pm
by Neville Briggs
Confessions of a Fundamentalist
I am a true believer;
Of doctrinal purity.
What is, is right
What's not, is wrong;
And that's what ought to be.
I'm blessed and don't resemble those
Who puddle in the mud
Where they delight
In putrid pong
To fire their foetid blood.
Yes ! I've been loyal and steadfast,
Never swerving left or right.
I mark the line;
Define the grade;
A beacon burning bright.
With all my gathered wisdom
I persist till victory's won.
The prize is mine;
The accolade
From those who say— well done !
Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 9:10 pm
by Heather
Well done Neville!
Heather

Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 9:23 pm
by Neville Briggs
Now it's your turn Heather.
Thanks Matt. I think we all have a line to hold Matt, the question is why do we do it.

Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 9:27 pm
by Catherine Lee
Very strong poem Neville - "well done!"

Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 11:18 pm
by Terry
G/day Neville
I agree well done.
I'm not sure just what line I'm supposed to hold.
Cheers
Terry
Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 11:59 pm
by Cropduster
Well done Neville
Steadfast and true
Allan
Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2015 8:32 am
by Maureen K Clifford

always good to have your two bobs worth Neville and uphold the standards
Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:01 am
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Catherine, hopefully I have succeeded in one of my aims which was to use direct speech.
Thanks Terry. I don't see you in there
Thanks Alan.
Maureen, who said it was autobiographical.

Is that me, oowah I'm undone

Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:25 am
by Heather
Once I've finished mucking about with other people's words, then I might have time to think about my own thoughts and words, Neville.

Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2015 11:06 am
by Neville Briggs
I reckon we are always thinking about our own thoughts and words. Write 'em down in a little notebook in no particular order, eventually we get a pile of " raw material" to build with once we have time to sift through the pile.