PVC Dancing

ABPA Financial members can post their Bush Poetry here ...
All Forum Visitors can view but only Financial ABPA Members can post and reply.
User avatar
Stephen Whiteside
Posts: 3784
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:07 pm
Contact:

PVC Dancing

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sat May 04, 2013 7:34 am

This is from a very strange - and wonderful - dream I had last night.


PVC Dancing

© Stephen Whiteside 04.05.2013

I found a length of PVC – a simple, bendy pipe.
I placed it to my mouth and blew. It made a music ripe.
I sauntered down the street a way, huff-puffing as I went.
No doubt to some I looked a rather odd and wayward gent –

But not to all! Some young folk – mostly girls – picked up my gist.
They tentatively began to sway and clap, to jive and twist.
I blew my pipe more strongly, with a strong and sassy beat,
And watched my crew reciprocate, with slowly rising heat.

In twos and threes they formed a troupe, and danced along the road.
I concentrated deeply in a syncopated mode.
I blew. I thought. I blew some more. My PVC was smoking.
These dancers’ fires would burn as long as I could keep on stoking!

A crowd soon came to watch the show, which brought me to my best.
I’d never have another chance I like this. I played with zest.
I played with vim. I played for now. I thought not of the morrow,
And mustered all the spark that I could beg or steal or borrow,

And still the dance intensity rose higher, ever higher.
Where once had been a cold, grey street was burning, churning fire.
At last I knew the time had come. I let them dance away.
I turned my music slowly down to let the street turn grey…

But it did not. No, not at first, for thunderous applause
Assailed my ears and shook my chest. I revelled in the roars
Of shoppers, clerks, commuters as they thanked me for my show,
Of breaking up the pattern of the dull, relentless flow

Of time that meant so little in this mean suburban street,
For pouring off some cold and switching it with Cajun heat.
I thanked the world for girls with souls, for lengths of PVC,
And most of all I guess I thanked the good old world…for me.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au

User avatar
Irene
Posts: 657
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 8:44 pm
Location: Jurien Bay. WA
Contact:

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Irene » Sat May 04, 2013 11:42 am

Ah Stephen - would love to see you dancing up a storm in the middle of the street!! :D
I watched a video last year of a guy who danced when the urge overtook him, and he brightened up the day for many - and had them dancing with him!
Catchya
Irene
What goes around, comes around.

User avatar
Stephen Whiteside
Posts: 3784
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:07 pm
Contact:

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sat May 04, 2013 6:35 pm

Thanks, Irene. Yeah, that's the idea, but I was just providing the music...
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au

User avatar
Maureen K Clifford
Posts: 8175
Joined: Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:31 am
Location: Ipswich - Paul Pisasale country and home of the Ipswich Poetry Feast
Contact:

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Aug 24, 2013 11:06 am

The world would be a much nicer place Stephen if we allowed such spontaneity to surface some times. I enjoyed the read - must have missed it when you put it up.
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/


I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.

User avatar
alongtimegone
Posts: 1305
Joined: Thu Jan 10, 2013 2:05 pm
Location: Brisbane

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by alongtimegone » Sat Aug 24, 2013 11:45 am

Sounds like a good deal to me. Nice work... the poem and the girls.
Wazza

User avatar
Stephen Whiteside
Posts: 3784
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:07 pm
Contact:

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Tue Aug 27, 2013 4:14 pm

What a delight to see old poems being discovered! Thanks Maureen, Wazza.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:57 am

I came across a short piece on the TV where a bloke made a hole down the middle of a carrot, drilled holes for fingering, then after jamming a clarinet mouthpiece onto it, played quite a passable resonant tune.( sort of a vegetarian ocarina ) So Stephen if you ever dream about playing on various vegetables from the market, you heard it here. :)
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

User avatar
Stephen Whiteside
Posts: 3784
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:07 pm
Contact:

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Aug 29, 2013 12:34 pm

Thanks, Marty.

A carronet, eh, Neville?
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Aug 29, 2013 2:06 pm

I guess so :o PVC pipe makes a good didgeridoo. You can even slide one inside the other and have a sort of trombone didgeridoo, I've seen it done by one of the indigenes. :)
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

User avatar
Stephen Whiteside
Posts: 3784
Joined: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:07 pm
Contact:

Re: PVC Dancing

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Aug 29, 2013 4:02 pm

Pulmonary Velocity Controller?
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
http://www.stephenwhiteside.com.au

Post Reply