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Neville Briggs
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by Neville Briggs » Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:18 pm
I've written a one word poem, I call it....
MONOLOGOS
Floccinaucinihilipilification.
Neville Briggs
p.s. The word means the action or habit of estimating something as worthless, which is probably the reaction of the viewers to my poem.
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manfredvijars
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by manfredvijars » Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:26 pm
Well Neville, are you going to complete your hippopotomonstrosesquipedalian piece in a rhyme?
(One word is very monotonous) ...
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Neville Briggs
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by Neville Briggs » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:00 pm
Manfred. It
must rhyme, after all it is only one word, a perfect rhyme. And it must scan, the metre is perfectly consistent with itself.
Last year at Dunedoo, Milton Taylor did a two word poem. It didn't rhyme or scan, It was free verse
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Dave Smith
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by Dave Smith » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:21 pm
Or this could be the second line in abab pattern
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolocanoconiosis
A condition meeting the word's definition is normally called silicosis.
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manfredvijars
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by manfredvijars » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:53 pm
Sorry Nev, "a rhyme is a repetition of similar sounds in
two or more words"
DAVO, I never knew you were a miner!!! ...
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Heather
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by Heather » Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:26 pm
You never fail to amuse, intrigue and educate us Neville.
I agree with Manfred though. For there to be a rhyme you must have two words.
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Dave Smith
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by Dave Smith » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:06 pm
Manfred I was but now I am a Senior and this poetry stuff has still got me Bugged.
Neville I am following your chat with Peely with great interest, syllables cause me
stress.
TFFN
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Heather
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by Heather » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:10 pm
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolocanoconiosis
hippopotomonstrosesquipedalian
Floccinaucinihilipilification.
They all sound like types of antibiotics or very very nasty diseases to me
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Dave Smith
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by Dave Smith » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:21 pm
Heather you would never want to catch any of them ‘cos ya couldn’t pronounce them for the doctor hey.
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Heather
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by Heather » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:36 pm
No Dave, I would just say "I'm sick doc, what's wrong with me?"