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Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:45 pm
by Heather
Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:59 pm
by Neville Briggs
Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:06 pm
by Heather
Thanks Neville - feel free

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Nice Marty suggested the same thing. He's might use the poem for his kids' poetry classes. This started out as my first ever attempt at internal rhyme - which is why the words were simple. I went back to it some time later when I was stuck for something to write and realised it could make a kids' poem. Goes to show, never throw anything out! It's kinda like the old woman that swollowed the fly in a way..
Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:15 pm
by Heather
Aahhmmmm, somebody is a bit confused about who they are today!

Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:52 pm
by mummsie
Great one Heather, made me think of ''There was an old lady who swallowed a spider'', would make a great kids tale, better talk to Trish about publishing
Sue
Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:55 pm
by Heather
Righto Sue, you're in charge of publicity, Neville can do illustrations and Trisha's in charge of publishing. Easy really!
A good leader knows how to delegate!

Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 1:57 pm
by mummsie
Does that include photography, I've got some good ones!!!
Sue
Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 2:00 pm
by Heather
Sue between you and Bob I am cornered, blackmailed, reduced to tears, can't leave my house, must keep my clothes on at all times, watch for spy satellites. What's the world coming to?

Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 2:02 pm
by Heather
I think somebody is feeling a bit left out today!

Re: Our Pa
Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 2:06 pm
by mummsie
I'm worried about you Marty, CLEO magazines
