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Sunnyside

Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:48 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
I picked up an Honourable Mention at the 2010 Toolangi CJ Dennis Poetry Competition (Adults Open Section) with this poem. (A little bit of history!)

‘Sunnyside’

© Stephen Whiteside 21.06.10

In the early years of the twentieth century, John Garibaldi Roberts, and his wife, Roberta, ran a colony for artists at their weekend retreat, ‘Sunnyside’, in South Sassafras (now Kallista) in the Dandenong Ranges, 40 km east of Melbourne.

It strikes me rather sadly, and reflects upon us badly,
That we’ve no collective mem’ry of those folks from ‘Sunnyside'.
We should swaddle them with rapture so eternally we capture
All their works and names and faces. They should make us swell with pride.

But we’re shallow and we’re rotten. All their details we’ve forgotten,
And the place itself is nothing but a sign, or some such thing.
Instead of genius espousing we have filled it up with housing.
It is dreary and suburban where our spirits high should sing.

But I should do some explaining, for I see I am not gaining
Any sympathy or ardour for the point I wish to make.
I will tell you very slowly why I think this place is holy.
I need clear comprehension. There is just too much at stake.

There was once a couple (married) who gave succour to the harried,
To the hounded, to the downcast who would stumble to their gate.
They were battling artists, mostly, and their forms were pale and ghostly,
And the welcome they received would make their loneliness abate.

John Garibaldi Roberts gave sweet comfort to these hobbits,
To these other worldly creatures who would come from time to time,
And his wife was specially caring (though the guests were oft quite wearing),
And her humble ministrations wrought an atmosphere sublime.

There were tram-cars old and rotted through their paddocks quaintly dotted,
For John Garibaldi Roberts had a tram-related job.

To a self-destructive menace by the name of CJ Dennis
They showed an ancient tram-car into which they bade him lob.

He made it very cosy, and his life grew much more rosy.
It was in its four walls camping that he penned his famous ‘Bloke’.
It’s a cause for celebration. It’s a story for the nation
How this modest couple managed his creative fires to stoke.

But it wasn’t just this poet. There were others. You should know it,
Artists like Tom Roberts also came to ‘Sunnyside’;
David Low and Charles Web Gilbert, Robert Kroll and Harold Herbert,
They visited the Roberts’ for a wild and joyous ride.

So, let us not forget it. No indeed, we should gazette it.
That its tale should be forgotten is a prospect all too grim.
Let the name of ‘Sunnyside’ be a constant source of pride.
Let it blaze down through the ages. Let it shine, and never dim!

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:14 pm
by Terry
G/day Stephen,
That's really is a top poem and so beautifully written, I'm surprised it didn't win outright.
I was also interested in the history referred to throughout the poem. Apart from C.J. Dennis I'm also a great fan of Tom Roberts we had an exhibition awhile back featuring some of his wonderful paintings.
I had said I would try to send in something to that Comp. but being away I misses out, hopefully next year I'll make it.
It sounds like a great festival, I'd love to attend one.

Cheers and Congratulations. - Terry

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 2:22 pm
by r.magnay
G'day Doc, good to see your name back up in print. Like Terry said, the winner must have been pretty good but congratulations anyway, maybe that's why we havn't heard much from you lately, too busy on this one! Good onya mate.

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:34 am
by Stephen Whiteside
Many thanks for your kind comments, Terry and Ross. If you're interested, I've posted some more information about this (well, a lot more, really!) under 'General Poetry Discussion'.

Stephen

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 12:20 pm
by Zondrae
G'day Stephen,

I have read this poem once and found the rhythm is intriguing
and I feel that it's been borrowed from the man from 'overflow'.
So I went and reread through it and it still has, this I repeat,
yes, I'm sure it has the feeling of the man from 'overflow'.

Is it just me or does this really informative and enjoyable piece remind you, Stephen, or anyone else for that matter, of the rhythm of 'Clancy'. It feels to me like that loping galloping style that, while in no way out of control, carries you along from the beginning to the end with a smooth but quite rushing pulse. I really like it. Well done for your high placing in the open adult section.

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 1:06 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Yes, it is pretty much the same pattern as 'Clancy', isn't it. I think it's a pretty common pattern all round. I know I've used it many times before, and often seen it used by others. It's just a very good template for bush verse. I'm glad you liked it so much, Zondrae.

Best wishes,
Stephen

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:38 pm
by Bellobazza
G'day Stephen...
One my favourite memories of Toolangi is your recitation of 'Sunnyside'.
I like to think of this forum as our modern cyber-space equivalent.

On the subject of the artistic circle who frequented Sunnyside, I was recently reading an excerpt from David Low's autobiography...among his recollections of the early days, he mentions a visit by Nellie Melba. It's not clear exactly where she visited...Sunnyside, Toolangi or perhaps where he and Hal Gye shared a studio in Melbourne ?
I was wondering if you know if any contribution was made by Dennis to her "Melba's Gift Book" which she organised to benefit the Belgian Relief Fund. I would love to find a resource to it, containing as it did pieces contributed by the likes of Aeneas Gunn, Henry Lawson, Dorathea Mackellar, Edward Dyson, Norman Lindsay, Hans Heysen, Low himself and many more. What a priceless collector's piece it would be.

Cheers, Will.

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:08 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Thanks, Will. I don't know the book, but I will look out for it. I do know Melba's old property at the fork in the road after Coldstream - one road takes you to Yarra Glen, the other to Healesville. It is surrounded by a stone wall which is topped by a magnificent hedge. Curiosity getting the better of me one day, I gently cruised down the drive-way - with the family wondering if I was doing the right thing! Sure enough, we were soon gently but firmly directed off the property!

I have a feeling David Low didn't spend much time at 'Sunnyside' - a visit or two in the early days, after which he went to London. Poor old David Low never seemed to forgive himself for mucking up the cover of Dennis' first book! I'd be interested to look at that autobiography one day.

Best wishes,
Stephen

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:13 pm
by Heather
Lovely poem Stephen. Enjoyed it. I passed Melba's property just a week or so ago. There didn't appear to be a sign but we were pretty sure it was the right place. You have more front than Myers, Stephen! :lol:

Heather :)

Re: Sunnyside

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:24 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Yeah, well, it was worth a try...