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LONELY - a rondelet

Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:57 am
by Maureen K Clifford
LONELY

a rondelet




Through open doors
he saw the wet and windy day.
Through open doors.

He heard laughter upon the moors -
smiling puddles begged kids to play.
The empty evening stretched away,
through open doors.



Maureen Clifford © 11/10

Re: LONELY - a rondelet

Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 10:04 am
by Heather
Very nice Maureen K. :)

Re: LONELY - a rondelet

Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 3:11 pm
by Neville Briggs
I like that Maureen. I think that you have dealt with the subject of lonliness before, this one is very very good.



Neville.