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Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Wed Nov 09, 2011 6:52 pm

Ah she's just a big sook Jim. anyway the reception on the satelite is not so goood that i can zoom in on every little detail.

Hey Sue I like ya.

Robert.

Mal McLean · Post by **Mal McLean** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:22 am

Heather, if my kids ever figure out how to make me a grandfather I promise I will recite this often to the as yet unborns.

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:52 pm

Tell them practice makes perfect Mal.

Robert Alan

Dave Smith · Post by **Dave Smith** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 8:39 pm

Now this here Matin Of Boyce,
Is Heathers fine poet of choice.
He has really good looks,
Knows a lot about chooks.
And at last is finding his voice.

Oh Yair an' Heather I like ya kids poem.

TTFN

Post by **Heather** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:25 pm

Mal I hope you have lots of little ones in the future to recite it to!

Thanks Dave.

Heather

worddancer · Post by **worddancer** » Fri Nov 11, 2011 6:58 pm

This is very clever, Heather.

Poetry is so good for telling a story.
Kids and adults get hooked straight away in the telling.
I love the rhythm and rhyming style and it is funny.
it's like watching a cartoon in your head.

Lots!

Love it, Eliza

http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/t ... t/18624988 This is my new book for Christmas.

Post by **Heather** » Fri Nov 11, 2011 7:29 pm

I'm so glad you like it Eliza. To think it started off as a bit of rhyming practice - but then the silly me took over I think! I recall giggling when I wrote it! (Must have been a full moon!)

Heather

worddancer · Post by **worddancer** » Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:10 am

Nothing wrong with a full moon, or a giggle for all that, got to get physical sometimes,

Eliza

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