T-Bone's Ninety Nine- with puchooashion but may need more

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:37 pm

Bet this one goes down well at the pub Marty, great when you can write the story in a poem and all the listeners are in on the story.

Good one mate.

Bob

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:59 pm

yeah i know what you mean I'm working on one for a big tough bloke who's sister says he is scared of frogs.

This is a bloke who will not hesitate to grab a brown snake and whip crack it but chuck a green frog at him and he freaks.

Bob

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Mon Apr 30, 2012 1:37 pm

That looks pretty good Marty. It would be easier to read if you worked on the punctuation a bit

I don't think that punctuation should be a hoop for writers to jump through it's an aid to the reader to receive the message better.

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Mon Apr 30, 2012 5:21 pm

That looks better I think .

I don't think there are rules for commas, I reckon they just go with the feel of the rhythm, so I guess some people have different ideas of where commas should go. You reminded me of thoughts about inverted commas for speech, I'll put that question in the discussion page.

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

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