Have a little lie down Marty - oh, sorry, you're at work, you're already lying down. Fan yourself then, that might help!
Our Pa
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Heather
Re: Our Pa
I can't possibly move this to the kids' section now!
Have a little lie down Marty - oh, sorry, you're at work, you're already lying down. Fan yourself then, that might help!
Have a little lie down Marty - oh, sorry, you're at work, you're already lying down. Fan yourself then, that might help!
He has "issues"!-
Bob Pacey
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Re: Our Pa
Ah she's just a big sook Jim. anyway the reception on the satelite is not so goood that i can zoom in on every little detail.
Hey Sue I like ya.
Robert.
Hey Sue I like ya.
Robert.
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Mal McLean
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Re: Our Pa
Heather, if my kids ever figure out how to make me a grandfather I promise I will recite this often to the as yet unborns.
Preserve the Culture!
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Bob Pacey
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Re: Our Pa
Tell them practice makes perfect Mal. 
Robert Alan
Robert Alan
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: Our Pa
Now this here Matin Of Boyce,
Is Heathers fine poet of choice.
He has really good looks,
Knows a lot about chooks.
And at last is finding his voice.
Oh Yair an' Heather I like ya kids poem.
TTFN
Is Heathers fine poet of choice.
He has really good looks,
Knows a lot about chooks.
And at last is finding his voice.
Oh Yair an' Heather I like ya kids poem.
TTFN
I Keep Trying
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Heather
Re: Our Pa
Mal I hope you have lots of little ones in the future to recite it to!
Thanks Dave.
Heather
Thanks Dave.
Heather
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Re: Our Pa
This is very clever, Heather.
Poetry is so good for telling a story.
Kids and adults get hooked straight away in the telling.
I love the rhythm and rhyming style and it is funny.
it's like watching a cartoon in your head. Lots!
Love it, Eliza
http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/t ... t/18624988 This is my new book for Christmas.
Poetry is so good for telling a story.
Kids and adults get hooked straight away in the telling.
I love the rhythm and rhyming style and it is funny.
it's like watching a cartoon in your head.
Lots! Love it, Eliza
http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/t ... t/18624988 This is my new book for Christmas.
It's never to late; just do it
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
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Heather
Re: Our Pa
I'm so glad you like it Eliza. To think it started off as a bit of rhyming practice - but then the silly me took over I think! I recall giggling when I wrote it! (Must have been a full moon!) 
Heather
Heather