There' yr go Marty. A bit easier to see the whole scene. ( But the inscription can't be read, I guess that's what you wanted )
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Packing crates and palings
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Neville Briggs
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Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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mummsie
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I much prefer this version Marty. It just seems to roll off the tongue, where as the second version is not so easy for the reader to comprehend. Just my thoughts for what there worth.
Just a few lines but very powerful. Well done.
Sue
Just a few lines but very powerful. Well done.
Sue
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.