The Ovens River

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alongtimegone
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Re: The Ovens River

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:45 am

Hi Heather ... that's just brilliant.
Wazza

Heather

Re: The Ovens River

Post by Heather » Tue Aug 20, 2013 1:02 pm

Thanks Warren, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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Re: The Ovens River

Post by Terry » Tue Aug 20, 2013 3:54 pm

There's a lot to be said about a good short poem and this one is.
Especially with the average person who's not so into poetry as say most of us,
many people switch of fairly quickly with longer modern poems.
Probably something to do with the times we live these days I guess.

Once again well done Heather.

Terry

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Re: The Ovens River

Post by Heather » Tue Aug 20, 2013 10:08 pm

Thanks again Terry. Most of my poems are about five stanzas or less because most of them are descriptions rather than stories and there is only so much you can say without starting to repeat yourself. I don't deliberately set out to write a short poem - that's just the way I tend to write.

This particular poem was a bit of an experiment. I had written some earlier ones about the Ovens River/Valley and wanted to write the same scene in a different format. It's ok, but certainly not the best I've ever written. I've written another, earlier poem in a similar format and it is probably one of my favourites. Hope to share it with you all soon. :)

Heather :)

warooa

Re: The Ovens River

Post by warooa » Tue Aug 20, 2013 11:52 pm

You're priviledged Heather . . I've never even seen a Henry, let alone got to stroke one :)

Heather

Re: The Ovens River

Post by Heather » Wed Aug 21, 2013 11:05 am

I know Marty....but you're only two degrees separated from that little Henry! Robyn deserved it. :)

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Re: The Ovens River

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:42 am

One can but dream hey H ?

A Henry being stroked mmmmmmmmm :o :oops:


Bob
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Re: The Ovens River

Post by Heather » Thu Aug 22, 2013 12:26 pm

:)

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Re: The Ovens River

Post by Robyn » Wed Aug 28, 2013 1:51 pm

Thanks Heather, and yes I knew your poem came with a certificate attached, but I wanted everyone to see the connection!
Cheers
Robyn
Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.

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