ENTANGLED

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Cropduster
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ENTANGLED

Post by Cropduster » Mon Dec 07, 2015 9:12 pm

ENTANGLED

I used to just wake up and crawl out of bed
Not worry at all about what lay ahead
But now there's 'to do' notes pinned on the doors
It seems that my life is entangled with yours

Your make-up has muscled my shaving stuff out
My status as 'single' is clearly in doubt
I've even found knickers in my hanky drawers
My love and my life is entangled with yours

There's cause and effect now with all that I do
My thoughts and my movements revolve around you
Where once it was me , now clearly there's two
What can I do?
My life is entangled with you

Suddenly, I have no life of my own
It's never just my friends who call on the phone
My life is confusing, and you are the cause
My love and my life is entangled with yours

When we both agree, its because I give in
Everyone knows 'she' is wiser than 'him'
But if I should argue, you sharpen the claws
My love and my life are entangled with yours

What would life be like if you were not here
I wonder, I ponder, I worry, I fear
Unravelling the mysteries, I stop and I pause
and love that my life is entangled with yours

I love that my life is entangled with yours

Copyright (c) Allan Cropper December 2015
Last edited by Cropduster on Mon Dec 14, 2015 6:03 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: ENTANGLED

Post by alongtimegone » Sat Dec 12, 2015 3:35 pm

I can identify with all of that Allan but it's all good. Last line the most telling. Should there be a D on the end of use?
Wazza

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Re: ENTANGLED

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun Dec 13, 2015 7:38 am

A thumb print develops on the top of your head


Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

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Re: ENTANGLED

Post by Cropduster » Mon Dec 14, 2015 6:06 am

Thanks Wazza, and correction made.

I fear the thumb print goes all the way to the soles of my feet, Bob. My writing is my escape :)

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