The Power

In the interests in broadening our horizons, this section is devoted to verse which falls outside the parameters of rhyme and metre, such as blank verse and free verse. Registered users are welcome to post their original works here.
Terry
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Re: The Power

Post by Terry » Sun May 08, 2016 10:14 am

Strange things are happening here!
I was sure I commented some days ago - ah well try again.

I'm certainly no judge of this sort of poetry as you know,
But it has grown since the last time I saw it - I like it.

Terry

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Shelley Hansen
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Re: The Power

Post by Shelley Hansen » Sun May 08, 2016 11:31 am

Heather, I love it! My favourite form of writing - the metaphor! It works well with bush poetry too - but there is even more scope for imagination with free verse.

I could just see your words dancing, laughing - and looking up at you from the page :D

Brilliant!

Cheers
Shelley
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Heather

Re: The Power

Post by Heather » Sun May 08, 2016 10:01 pm

Thanks Terry and thanks for nudging me to work on it.

Thank you Shelley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a bit of fun.

Heather :)

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