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Unrhymed

Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2015 11:17 am
by alongtimegone
There are times when I leave it all behind
and venture to a remote and empty place
where nothing has meaning
and no one has form.
Here it is barren and silent
and I am quite alone.
I hang on steadfastly to the last
drop of nothingness for I know
that with consciousness comes the
real. And the real is what I fear most.

Wazza

Re: Unrhymed

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2015 4:07 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Very thought-provoking, Wazza! It sounds to me like a metaphor for marvellous, dreamless sleep!

Cheers, Shelley

Re: Unrhymed

Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2015 9:12 pm
by alongtimegone
Yes Shelley, it's the waking that spoils a good sleep. :)
Wazza

Re: Unrhymed

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 6:54 pm
by Catherine Lee
I thought I'd already commented on this one Wazza but apparently not. As Shelley says, this is very thought provoking, and I like it a lot.

Re: Unrhymed

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 9:47 am
by alongtimegone
Thanks Catherine.
Wazza