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MESSAGE STICK

Posted: Wed May 27, 2015 8:44 am
by Maureen K Clifford
MESSAGE STICK ... Maureen Clifford © The Scribbly Bark Poet



Walking together along a deserted beach
with blue cloudless sky above, the froth of spume at our feet
the sound of gulls drifting on the breeze,
and pristine sand stretching for miles,
unmarked except for pippy mounds;
we found a shell pink pebble,
with a remnant of a past geologic age embedded in its depths.

Sea treasure.

Our pebble on the beach.
Our secret 'message stick'
placed in our special place to the left of the marker
tells the other
'I was here today thinking of you'.

We cannot always walk together.

Sometimes solitary footsteps walk these unmarked shores
and pristine sands beneath blue cloudless skies.

Move the pebble to the right.
'I was here today – miss you'.
Another message from the 'message stick'

Those who do not know,
see just a pebble on a beach.

Re: MESSAGE STICK

Posted: Sat May 30, 2015 5:35 pm
by Neville Briggs
You've made a good picture of the beach Maureen. I don't quite understand the reference to two together and solitary.

Re: MESSAGE STICK

Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 10:29 am
by Maureen K Clifford
Oh Neville! Really! First there were two - then only one hence the message
reflections.jpg

Re: MESSAGE STICK

Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 1:00 pm
by Neville Briggs
I'm a man, so much to learn. :lol:

Re: MESSAGE STICK

Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2015 12:47 pm
by Glenny Palmer
You can come outta your cupboard now Neville............ ;)

Mausey...makes me want to stroll on the beach. Thanks for posting...

Re: MESSAGE STICK

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:59 am
by Maureen K Clifford
The only beach I would be strolling on right now would have to be somewhere where it is warm - Hawaii perhaps - as Bob succinctly said - merde! - It is cold :)