Re: Collaborative poem 3 - Beneath Her Wing
Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:05 pm
Beneath Her wing
We sheltered there, beneath her wing, in days before it all began.
Our youth and innocence the thing protecting us from boy to man.
Still blind to horrors up ahead we vowed to stand beside our mate
and stand we did in life and death to meet again at Peter's gate.
ZK
Beneath her wing we made a vow, we six young men, on battle's edge
that each man would, like brothers true, hold fast in courage, keep this pledge.
If one should fall as victim of a bullet from the dreaded foe,
then one of us would write a note to those back home, to ease the blow.
ZK
Beneath her wing we talked of home, of sweethearts , mums and familes missed
of where we lived and who we loved before the day came to enlist
Our home away from home was made , beneath the palms on Moratai
We spoke of hopes and dreams of youth, our will to live to get us by
MB
But little did we know back then of all the horrors of a war
exuberance of youth had blinded us to what would be in store.
We felt we were invincible; six mates who gathered there back then,
though little more than boys at first, we’d soon be trained as fighting men
TP
Beneath her wing we made a vow, we six young men, on battle's edge
that each man would, like brothers true, hold fast in courage, keep this pledge.
If one should fall as victim of a bullet from the dreaded foe,
then one of us would write a note to those back home, to ease the blow.
ZK
Though newly pinned with angles wings, on shoulders that were born to fly,
our squad, like many families, was split to face the foe on high.
Deployed where orders took us off to many strange and foreign parts
but vows we made beneath her wing were deeply carved upon our hearts.
ZK + JP (thanks John)
We fought the Japs in Tarakan with Kitty hawks up in the air
Spitfires and Bristol Beaufighters which gave no quarter anywhere,
and young and fearless all were we, invincible or so we thought;
though soon the War Gods sent their bill the price was paid. ‘twas blood they sought.
MKC
We sheltered there, beneath her wing, in days before it all began.
Our youth and innocence the thing protecting us from boy to man.
Still blind to horrors up ahead we vowed to stand beside our mate
and stand we did in life and death to meet again at Peter's gate.
ZK
Beneath her wing we made a vow, we six young men, on battle's edge
that each man would, like brothers true, hold fast in courage, keep this pledge.
If one should fall as victim of a bullet from the dreaded foe,
then one of us would write a note to those back home, to ease the blow.
ZK
Beneath her wing we talked of home, of sweethearts , mums and familes missed
of where we lived and who we loved before the day came to enlist
Our home away from home was made , beneath the palms on Moratai
We spoke of hopes and dreams of youth, our will to live to get us by
MB
But little did we know back then of all the horrors of a war
exuberance of youth had blinded us to what would be in store.
We felt we were invincible; six mates who gathered there back then,
though little more than boys at first, we’d soon be trained as fighting men
TP
Beneath her wing we made a vow, we six young men, on battle's edge
that each man would, like brothers true, hold fast in courage, keep this pledge.
If one should fall as victim of a bullet from the dreaded foe,
then one of us would write a note to those back home, to ease the blow.
ZK
Though newly pinned with angles wings, on shoulders that were born to fly,
our squad, like many families, was split to face the foe on high.
Deployed where orders took us off to many strange and foreign parts
but vows we made beneath her wing were deeply carved upon our hearts.
ZK + JP (thanks John)
We fought the Japs in Tarakan with Kitty hawks up in the air
Spitfires and Bristol Beaufighters which gave no quarter anywhere,
and young and fearless all were we, invincible or so we thought;
though soon the War Gods sent their bill the price was paid. ‘twas blood they sought.
MKC