PERFECT RESPONSE - wish I had thought of that.

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PERFECT RESPONSE - wish I had thought of that.

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:08 am

This was the response on another site to my post that the poem was beaut but there was a bit of a bump in the rhythm. I reckon it is a pearler :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: I reckon you will appreciate this one Neville.

The "bump" in the rhythm was entirely intentional as in the tradition of carpet making, the "weaver" traditionally put in an intentional flaw, as a signal that the product was man-made, as opposed to the perfection of "God-made."
Don't you just love it :D
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Post by Glenny Palmer » Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:15 am

Aaaah whooo ha ha! Hey Maurenn didya reply....'''Ooops. Sorry God.. I didn't realise just Who I was critiquing.'' Ooh haa he haw!! :lol:
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Re: PERFECT RESPONSE - wish I had thought of that.

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:29 pm

No I wouldn't have been game :lol: :lol: :lol: I went straight to the naughty corner - chagrined and deflated. :(
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Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:36 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: That says it Maureen. I always like to remind myself that the word ART is the first three letters of the word ARTIFICIAL. ;) :P
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Re: PERFECT RESPONSE - wish I had thought of that.

Post by Zondrae » Sun Feb 05, 2012 6:51 pm

G'day Maureen,


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