Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

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Terry
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Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Terry » Fri Sep 17, 2021 10:15 am

Never written one of these before,
This one sound a bit more like ‘Confuses Says’

Haiku – Dawning

When the mind can see
What the heart already knows
you have inner peace

Terry

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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Ron » Fri Sep 17, 2021 10:28 am

Liked it Terry, succinct with a deep message. (better than that confuses bloke! :lol: )
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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Terry » Fri Sep 17, 2021 11:42 am

Thanks Ron

Terry

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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Sep 17, 2021 3:09 pm

WOW!

I love it Terry - well done you - for a first go that is pretty damn good :lol:
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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Terry » Fri Sep 17, 2021 6:55 pm

Thanks Maureen

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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Catherine Lee » Sat Sep 18, 2021 4:44 pm

Lovely, Terry - deep and serene

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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Shelley Hansen » Sat Sep 18, 2021 6:26 pm

That's a beauty, Terry!
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Re: Homework - Haiku 'Dawning'

Post by Terry » Sat Sep 18, 2021 9:06 pm

Thanks Catherine & Shelley

This is all new stuff for me, but I can see the possibilities.

Terry

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