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Re: STOLEN INNOCENCE

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2015 3:34 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Good use of the prompts Trisha - coming from left field as well - a different approach. Well done

Re: STOLEN INNOCENCE

Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2015 9:03 pm
by Catherine Lee
I agree Trish; a very different approach - both clever and chilling

Re: STOLEN INNOCENCE

Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2015 8:22 am
by Trisha Patterson
Thanks Maureen & Catherine.
Not a nice topic, but sadly, a reality of what does happen far too often.
Trish

Re: STOLEN INNOCENCE

Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2015 10:31 pm
by Shelley Hansen
Excellent poem, Trisha! Yes, you are right - it happens too often.

I like the way you've used enjambment for "hideous probes" - a clever way to get around tricky syllables!

Cheers, Shelley

Re: STOLEN INNOCENCE

Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2015 9:00 am
by Trisha Patterson
Thanks Shelley. Enjambment does often help with some of the prompts, especially when trying to keep the metre flowing.
Trish