ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

Really like what you have done here Marty. It has a real atmospheric feel to it - I like the idea of the old digger standing his watch alongside the younger bloke - I'm sure they do.

The turned up hat, laconic air , toned muscles well defined

Great description - well done.

You gone off punctuation?

I have done guard duty many times, the most profound pseudo-philosophical thoughts that I had then, were that I was totally bored and wished to hell I was out of there to ease my aching back and legs.

I can give you some of my punctuations Marty I very seldom use them either.

Bob

You should have done some star jumps Neville - that would have livened things up - for everyone!

I remember an old joke about the old guard with his fly undone !


Nup cannot tell it here.

Bob

some great lines there Marty-enjoyed it

Sue

I agree with Sue

Well done Marty.

Cheers Terry