ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

I like this Marty - short but says a lot - Times markers perhaps for a title

To our future we are led might work better for you -although doubtless the future might be a heavy load

2nd verse line 3 you have used the word 'on' twice really close together - perhaps you might consider using we struggle through to break that up. Just a suggestion.

Thanks Marty and good on you for having 2 shots at the homework - totally different and both good.

These are the short verses that I sometimes frame and put on the wall for a while Marty well done.

Yep I agree with Maureen re the on on line.

Bob