Re: Homework week ended 7th April - Turning wheels
Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2014 2:49 pm
Great use of the prompts Marty - well done and I like your take on it - Typo in the 2nd last verse - They must reach their destination.
This verse sent shivers up my spine as it pretty well depicted the last driver who drove the last coach on the Yuleba-Surat run, his image popped straight into my head as I read your words.
This verse sent shivers up my spine as it pretty well depicted the last driver who drove the last coach on the Yuleba-Surat run, his image popped straight into my head as I read your words.
An ancient bloke is driving whitened hair blows in the breeze
he keeps a keen eye open as he steers them past the trees
aboard a group of strangers have embarked along the way
they say they are the souls he takes to meet their judgement day