Homework 25/11/13: Legends

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David Campbell
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Homework 25/11/13: Legends

Post by David Campbell » Mon Nov 11, 2013 1:03 pm

Legends

I dunno ’bout these legends,
'cause I just calls ’em ‘feet’,
an’, danglin’ from me ankles,
they sure looks kinda neat!

An’ then I’ve got me footends,
wot round ’ere we call ‘toes’…
last time I did some countin’
I ’ad ’bout ten of those.

Then, finally, there’s toesends,
wot some may know as ‘nails’,
a sight that, for decorum,
no gentleman unveils!

David 11/11/13

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Re: Homework 25/11/13: Legends

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Nov 11, 2013 1:23 pm

You're a legend all on your own - did you have razorblades for breakfast ? :lol: I had to read it twice before the penny dropped :oops: my first thought was you were talking poetic 'feet' rather than 'poets feet'. Good fun David
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