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More homework w/e 18/4/13

Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 3:18 pm
by Neville Briggs
2 FOOPBOR HAIKU


Green grass with white posts nearby
where thick men running
go up, go down; who knows why ?

Kneeing, wrenching, gouging eyes,
torn knee ligaments
underneath grey wintery skies.

Re: More homework w/e 18/4/13

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 5:56 am
by warooa
Carn the Hawks! Hot pies, cold beer,
speccys and check-sides,
Saturday arvos this year.

The buzz that is imminent,
the senses are tweaked,
the deep heat and liniment

The passion of a Byron;
Pickett or Kickett,
a kick after the siren.

Footy's back :D

Re: More homework w/e 18/4/13

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:19 am
by Neville Briggs
:lol: :lol:

I wonder if any of our modern day bush poets could manage to do , after Banjo's Geebung Polo Club ,The Geelong Football Club.

Re: More homework w/e 18/4/13

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 4:49 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
OK so here is the challenge –
3 to 6 verses.

17 syllables per verse or less

CLOSE my friends but not close enough :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

But good on you for having a go. It's not as easy as it looks now is it? ;)