'Artistic Creations' - Homework 2.4.12

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'Artistic Creations' - Homework 2.4.12

Post by jakkimay » Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:45 am

Aaaarrrrggggghhhhhhh!!!!!! Didn't I have fun with this one??!!! Talk about a challenge! Took me awhile, but I think I got it. :)


‘Artistic Creations’

Jaded she was after ending her week
Artistic juices had been a bit bleak
Kindly, her friend came to offer some help
Keen to repair the discomfort she felt
Ingenious thoughts were flying around
M aybe, she thought, some ideas could be found
Arty vibrations may come to her hands
Yielding creations to suit all her fans

© Jakki May
22.3.12
'Friendship is love without His wings!'

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Mar 22, 2012 12:17 pm

Very well said Jakki - you did good :lol: :lol:
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Post by Wendy Seddon » Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:55 pm

Good one - Good onya!
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Post by jakkimay » Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:14 pm

Ah! Thanks guys; you're always very encouraging.
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Post by Robyn » Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:15 pm

Well done Jakki :D :D
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