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A "cross" Stick ... thingy

Post by manfredvijars » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:33 pm

I'm doing a Zondrae here ... Had this one on file too ...
A triple-cross-tic where the first, third and fifth letters down in first word of each line make the words ...
Column1.Argadargada … Column3. Ross' domains Column5. desert lands
Ross Magnay, sent a photo of a sign to Argadargada and that was the inspiration for the piece
Single cross-thingies are boring ... :D
Diderot: French philosopher and principal editor of an encyclopaedia that disseminated scientific knowledge.
Landerandera – a waterhole in the area.

Argadargada
(March 2007)

Abraded rocks abandoned were once utilised for grinding;
rooted deep in ancient times now lie around for finding.
Gasps from heat distracting him, yes give a clear reminding.

Assieged by vast expanse of red, but somehow it protects you.
Diderot could not conceive how desert's spell affects you.
Aborted wreck; memorial – stark, of he who disrespects You.

Ramulose she-oaks cling to a wisp of wind and quiver -
guaranteed to hold spellbound. Look, rain it's Her life giver.
Abient animations may be seen for just a sliver

Dined beside the car near Landerandera left him sighing
(assisting foolish folk who almost copped the desert's frying).
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Re: A "cross" Stick ... thingy

Post by Robyn » Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:09 pm

Very impressive Manfred. That would do my brain in :lol:
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Re: A "cross" Stick ... thingy

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Mar 20, 2012 10:45 am

Wha.. I don't get it ??? :o :roll:
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Re: A "cross" Stick ... thingy

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:03 am

Please explain Mannie - OK I got the Argadargada bit - your new name?????

But Ross domains desert lands? Is that a web address - I'll go and have a look

Found this with some fabulous shots on it - it'sthat dry that by the time you had wet your whistle you would be definitely be mumbling
Ar gadar gada get away from here. :lol: :lol: :lol:

http://www.fionalake.com.au/blog/news/a ... er-hughes/
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Re: A "cross" Stick ... thingy

Post by manfredvijars » Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:47 am

Martyboy wrote:I reckon at times these discussions show up the fact that too much thought on the subject is actually harmful. By all means look to create your opus , but dont let the pursuit of the perfect line, stanza or poem overtake all other creativity.

Well said Marty ... I agree ... :D

I'd like to think that I write some good stuff (occasionally), I know that I have a lot of crap on my books, but by Henry-bloody-Paterson and Banjo-bloody-Lawson, the crap took me to some great places ...

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